Eternal-Dahaka on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/eternal-dahaka/art/A-20-285080124Eternal-Dahaka

Deviation Actions

Eternal-Dahaka's avatar

A-20

Published:
893 Views

Description

Corel Painter 11

More pen tool usage. I've been wanting to draw her for a long time but my recent suggestion to :iconnegix77: made me really want to draw her myself.

I can only guess that this is either the first or one of the only pictures I've found of A-20 on this site. She needs more love people!

The colors are a bit off, but there weren't any good reference picture to get the correct color scheme.

This is probably too simple a picture to deserve a critique, but I'll make use of my Premium while it lasts. >: D
Image size
1500x2000px 641.41 KB
© 2012 - 2024 Eternal-Dahaka
Comments16
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
YourLittleStalker's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Of course, I'm such a great artist myself, it just seemed as though you needed some critique since no one else gave you any.
Honestly, this is a very cute drawing. I love the way you drew it.
There are a few flaws, but they're not that noticeable.
The number one thing I think you should've done was shade it. It would've looked more professional. So you should really practice on shading your art. You would be surprised, it makes everything look ten times better. Trust me. ^ ^
Also I think you could've made her shoulders a little broader.

That's all I can critique on, because that's all I know myself. I'm honestly not the kind of artist that should be critiquing your kind of work, but I hope it helps.
Remember, practice on shading! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>